As the flashes lit
the darkened sky
Wave upon wave
washed the old
cobblestones
Ancient drums
pounded out
a tempo
The winds died
as a slow drizzle
bathed the land
From afar a
whistle blew
As thoughts of
old stogies and
trailers for rent …
Flowed through
this tired old mind
The evening air
cooled as
the whistle
grew closer
And thoughts
of midnight
train ride
through the
peanut fields
of Georgia …
Played on
through my
thoughts
The drizzle
settled with
the Sun
And turned
to a mist and
mist into a fog
That whistle
was much
closer now
Brought a
field to a blaze
and the moon’s
yellow haze …
As this tired
old mind tried
to make sense
of it all
As that whistle
was almost
a stones
throw away
I seemed to
remember how
love had been
good to me …
As this tired
old mind
drifted off
when I wore a
younger man’s
#train whistles #rain, #music, #lyrics …

- As I wrote this I thought about some of my favorite songs over the years. The music and lyrics, and for some reason these lines and song always stood out’ Roger Miller, King of the Road “ I smoke old stogies I have found short and not too big around”“ trailer for sale or rent, rooms to let fifty cents ”Jim Weatherly, Midnight Train to Georgia original titled a Midnight Plane to Houston. McKuen, Jean : “the fields are a blaze in the moons yellow haze, come out of your dream Bonnie Jean ”Rod McKuen, Loves Been Good To Me, “ hiked a hundred highways and never found a home, still and all I’m happy the reason is you see once and awhile along the way love’s been good to me, there was a girl in Denver she could laugh away the dark clouds and smile away the tears ”Billy Joel, Piano Man “ Piano Man please play me a song tonight, it was sad and it was sweet and i knew complete when I wore a younger mans clothes I flipped some of the lyrics around to fit the mood.
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